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Exercise 4.12
Revise each of the following sentences to create parallel structure:
3. When you leave a voice-mail message:
• Summarize your main point in a sentence.
• The name and phone number should be given slowly and distinctly.
• The speaker should give enough information that the recipient can act on the message.
• Tell when you’ll be available to receive the recipient’s return call.